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ILoveSrfrs Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 69California |
I've done it again I've fallen in love with you Your like a magnet Why do you do the things you do? You draw me to you Then push me away You'll be my boyfriend- If you feel like it that day Your so nice sometimes Ask for the key to my heart But then you lock it up And it's ripping me apart You hold me like a puppet To put on a little show And I still can't help myself It's so hard to say no I want you so much I need you so bad Why couldn't you realize all the possibilites we had? I've done it again I've fallen in love with you Your like a magnet Why do you do the things you do? |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This poem is well written, I like the way it ended with the beginning- don't fall for him though, if he keeps doing it, don't be an enabler....just get away from him, quickly. Welcome to Passions.  ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
I know just what you mean by this. I myself did the same thing with this one guy 4 times. I know its hard to just leave and move on, but it is the best thing to do if he keeps doing this to you. He's not worth your pain. This was really *really* good. Welcome to Passions! |
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SweetStuff27 Junior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 10LA, California, USA |
This is a very well written poem and I think all girls, young and old, can relate to it. Welcome to Passions!!! |
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