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Teen Poetry #2

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foxy_16
Junior Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 31
Lake Lillian, MN, USA

0 posted 1999-11-22 10:10 PM

This is a poem i wrote that i don't know how i came up with- it just expresses how lost i feel because i don't know what direction to take right now. I want to tell him i love him- but will it ruin it? I have yet to find out...

This feels real
But how do I know
I felt it before
But look how that turned out
I want to tell you
But I can't
Because I'm afraid
That if I admit it
I'm going to get hurt
God, I need something
Just a single hint
To tell me what I should do
I don't want to feel any pain
I want you to know how I feel
Please just one sign....
Help me.

Natalie Guerrero
New Member

since 1999-11-22

Posts 9

1 posted 1999-11-22 11:34 PM

I thought this was such a great poem. I can really relate to it. Keep up the good writing and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Carrie
Junior Member

since 1999-11-18

Posts 11
lithia springs,GA,USA

2 posted 1999-11-23 07:16 AM

I can relate to your poem also. I know how it feels and I am in this situation right now.
So I have no answers but I can tell you that your poem is GOOD! I have asked for God to help me too. But I have not received an answer. Well maybe I have but just have not figured it out yet! G/G
Carrie

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