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Teen Poetry #2

Oh, spare me, Love!

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-12-18 12:14 PM

Oh, spare me, Love! Don’t burst inside my chest!
Allow me to distribute what you gave me!
Filled to the brim and stripped of all my rest,
I’m blessed to know that you enslaved me.
Simplicity, how great you’ve grown to be!
Neither, too plain nor too complex in essence.
How come you chose to show yourself to me,
When millions are craving for your presence?
How come the holiest of churches lack your will?
And purest wine cannot bring out your flavor?
How come the feeling that you make me feel,
Was absent, on Last Supper, from the table?
As long as uniform still differs from unique,
I’ll feed the universe with verses from my beak!

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[This message has been edited by Master (edited 12-18-1999).]

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-12-18 12:41 PM

Wow! Great Sonnet...i can never write sonnets so that they sound as good as yours! Job Well done!! I'm loven it!

Starboards

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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 1999-12-19 10:39 AM

Thank you starboards, you should try, it's really not that hard.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-12-19 10:41 PM

Another one exellently completed, Master.

*Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 1999-12-20 07:34 PM

Thanks again!

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