Teen Poetry #2 |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny ![]() |
i wrote this poem peace by peace toa girl named inna......read give me ur opinons there used to be a great power that comes over me. but did u know,that wen u go....it would be my darkside i'd see but every time i saw u i'd drop to my knees i used to see so many futures,wen i stared in ur eyes and now i feel the lies ,that i put in my mind are found but did u know,that wen i go....i'll find where i lied with ur sound, i compare you to the stars in the ski,from the night where i'd lie,on the beach Before it became to cold to surive,i used to sit night after night stearing at the moon knowing this moon was looking down on u but did u know that i cant go........on... living knowing the truth,that u dont feel the same towards me. BABY!!!.........I told u i comepare to a life living old and ur that coat wen its cold..to me. there used to be this great power inspired by me....but did u know,it never goes...and now my eyes will be a live wen i see u that night with him. I wish i were a poet |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
wow that suked |
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