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BraTt
Junior Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 41
Yakima, WA United States

0 posted 1999-12-30 02:59 PM

You are the one in which I dream about at night
I think of the time we spent together,
How I wish we could be together now.
I long for you to say I can be yours, and you are mine
But I know that is something that will not happen

I see the way you look at her
It isn't fair, I know she doesn't want you
She enjoys your company, but only as a friend
I would know this,
Since she is my best friend.

We have a friendship, and I would not want to ruin that
So for now, I will keep my feelings inside
I can pretend these feelings aren't real
Won't you for one second pretend you like me too…
Or is that too hard to do?

*~You are the star for which all evenings wait~*

Marissa
Junior Member

since 1999-12-25

Posts 20

1 posted 1999-12-31 05:05 PM

Nice work! I really like this poem, because I can relate to it. I like knowing that there are other people that go through what I do. Keep up the good work, I'd like to hear more from you!

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

2 posted 1999-12-31 05:08 PM

Very nice. I can relate to this one. There is always a very thin line between friendship and anything more. Very lovely.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

BraTt
Junior Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 41
Yakima, WA United States

3 posted 2000-01-01 01:00 PM

Thanks for your replies.

*~You are the star for which all evenings wait~*

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

4 posted 2000-01-02 06:40 AM

Im with Ast on the thin line ebtween friendship and anythign else. But would you really want him to pretend he likes you for even one second? Not only is it dishonesty but it has been known to ruin a lot of friendships. I think it might be better off to wait for him to really like you, not pretend! But once again, good poem!! I can see you put a lot of emotion in them, and that is always good!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

BraTt
Junior Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 41
Yakima, WA United States

5 posted 2000-01-03 12:35 PM

Thanks for the comment. I guess that was kind of how I felt about the guy ( i won't mention any names) but I am over him. I just wanted to post this poem to see what people thought about it. Thanks though.

*~You are the star for which all evenings wait~*

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

6 posted 2000-01-03 08:15 AM

Nice poem. The green is a little hard to see, though. You are pretty talented. Keep writting.

Dean
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 120
Canada

7 posted 2000-01-03 09:02 PM

Hey girl waz up?? I like your stuff it's dope!! Anyways I will Continue to read your stuff!!

Yours Truly
Dean

"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)

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