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A Daughters Last Words
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A Daughters Last Words |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
It's time for me to go now I'm off to a better place Don't cry mother You knew all the time I should've listened to you And stayed away from drugs But everyone was doing it And they said I'd be fine The didn't tell me I'd get addicted And get black circles around my eyes They didn't mention the paleness of my skin Or my shaking hands Oh mother please forgive me! I know now that I was wrong Can't the doctors save me? I don't want to die! I want to go to my senior prom And experience love at first sight What was it like mommy? when you met daddy? Was it love at first sight? My eyes are getting heavy mom Keep me awake I'm not tired Say I'm forgiven I Love.... I know Marilyn said 2 per day, but those two I posted were my sis's so I decided to post one of my own..hope ya'll like it!  |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
This was really good. It had so much feeling in it. It's also a good message. It should be posted EVERYWHERE. (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Kitty Junior Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 20Paris, Ontario, Canada |
wow, this poem is not only very well writen, it has a very powerful message too. great. He has made everything beautiful in its time Ecclesiastes 3:11 Kitty |
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