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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA 
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Warring Without, within. Vile end of violent Minds manipulating mindsets Until no one knows what is right or wrong. Civilization gone berserk Trying to justify The right to be Warring. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A timely post, Shenachie - I feel exactly like your middle line right now - right and wrong becoming very confused in everyone's opinions [and everyone has one, at least...]... AND a very good portrayal of tight Rictameter, as well! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bridget~ EXTREMELY well done ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very well written! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Warring To prevent war The great dichotomy A world in cyclical condemn In pursuance destined to self destruct Despite progenitors' reproof Watching with revulsion Ingeminate Warring |
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