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You Touched Me
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You Touched Me |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
You Touched Me and so gentle was your touch, I was completely unaware of your presence. Then you touched me. And I felt a velvet whisper that nudged so very, very gently on my skin. Again you touched me. And I saw you. Then I wished that you would touch me many, many times again. For when you touch me you touch me deep within my soul and I am moved. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful Ohme! A touch can come from air and be air, yet move much. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Ohme!  ------------------ Denise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A touch can mean so much, and you touched me with this poem. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Thanks for reading and commenting Denise. Thank you Isis. As a poet, I also want to place a touch that is felt and not felt at the same time. Martie, I think at times the gentlest touch can have the greatest effect. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This poem touched me...nicely spoken ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
In loving memory this day of Ina Lorene Meadows~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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