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Dark cloud |
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DMBfan New Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 2 |
A dark cloud casts a shadow In the happiness of my dream I awoke so suddenly and wondered what it was supposed to mean I sat there and I thought About your importance in my life but the place i had in yours never, ever reached those heights i fooled myself into believing that if i was patient enought and waited you and i would someday be together instead you cause me to be someone i hated the actions and words that come from you were more than i should have had to bear yet, i was still drawn to you and found myself waiting there But when i awoke from my dream i realized i was now free the dark cloud was pushed away because now i could finally see |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely written. Welcome to passions  |
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