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ex-terminator New Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 7usa |
a sad day it was my best friend left me, I feel so small just the size of a pea. she just turned on me and walked away. puddles of tears at my feet, I can't hear her voice ever sweet. standing here all alone. just as such sets a dreary tone. pieces of me she just up and threw away. that is why it's a sad day. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I liked this poem: succinct and yet packed with emotion, not an easy task! Corinne |
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Jewl_24_1999 Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 64USA |
very emotional, it hurts so to lose a friend. |
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