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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-06-04 11:01 AM

Splendid is the dawn
with the choir of
birdsong singing
the awakening
of the sun.
Heralding a new
summers day,
that unfolds her
splendor
in lush and verdant
flora.
Petals open to receive
the kiss
of sunbeams effervescent
light,that dances
on the waters surface
in a sparkling ballet
to the symphony
of summers haunting
melody,
that awakens the
butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance,
in their silent song
of praise
to God.

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Jester59701
Member

since 2000-02-29

Posts 154

1 posted 2000-06-04 12:03 PM

Hi Ellie!
This is just beautiful! So pleasant and illustrative! What a joyous song!
Fantastic Ellie!
Jester

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-06-04 01:57 PM

What a lovely song you've written. You knew I would like this. Well done!

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

3 posted 2000-06-04 03:47 PM

Amen, ellie; So loving and serene is the love of your poetry and heart. I appreciate and love your sweet, sweet spirit. marcy

BSC

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Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

4 posted 2000-06-05 10:21 AM

Well, my toes are tapping to this one Ellie. What a beautiful song, I could put this one right in the CD player. I'll hum the tune now as I do my housework. This is wonderful. Bonnie

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

5 posted 2000-06-05 11:09 AM

If only others could see how beautiful the awaiting day is, like you have so picturequely captured in the work, I think there would be a lot more early risers eager to get their day started! Thnak you for this lovely vision of God's Goodness upon us, David< !signature-->

"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)

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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

6 posted 2000-06-06 11:10 AM

Thank you all so much fr your kind and sweet loving replies. You all inspire me so much. love, Ellie

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

7 posted 2000-06-10 11:51 AM

Oh Ellie, you gently unfolded God's beauty here! This is beautiful!!

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