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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Majestic mountains standing guard, Clouds gathering at their peaks, Reflecting on the mirrored lake; This must be a place where He speaks. From the valley that passes through them, Mist rises to meet the sky, A rainbow of glistening, opaque rays, Gone in the blink of an eye. In the narrow opening, With a mountain on each side, Stands Our Lord Almighty, Arms spread and opened wide. Behind Him shimmering waterfalls, Cascading down the hill, Gracefully, doves are soaring, As He is standing still. The sleeves of His white robe billow, As He shows this magnificent sight, Embracing His beauty in nature, As He shines His glorious light. I stared in awesome wonder, And gazed upon His face, As Our Lord stood in this valley, And blessed me with His grace. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 07-12-2000).] [This message has been edited by BSC (10-16-2005 01:19 PM).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oh my, my Bonnie, I have no words to say how this made me feel. I can visual the scene that you gloriously brushed with your pen. I find no words qualifying for the beauty of this poem. Absolutely breathtaking. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Awesome! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
A poem as only our sweet Bonnie can write. Awesome and wondrous! Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ell |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a way you have with words! Fantastic imagery in a wonderful piece. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Bonnie some day I hope to see what fills your visions and gives you this awesome inspiration. I know it is the Lord! But you must have some fantastic imagery outside or within to write like this?!! |
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YeshuJah Malikk Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 263 |
The heavens declare the glory of JAH and the firmament showeth HIS handy works... I never cease to bow my spirit at HIS feet as I daily behold the works of HIS hand. This poem took me there. Ain't it awe inspiring? Thanks for painting this word picture. |
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