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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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Ok, as the fever spreads, thought I'd give it a whack. Even though I know it should be written on nature. Our own versions we can call "The Christian Haiku."  your joints pulled from their sockets In the name of LOVE as you hung in pain for us to free human kind <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ANGEL!!!! WOW you have done an excellent job here..... really beautiful Haiku's As Jamie put it to me not long ago... welcome to Haiku Annonymous !!!  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
haikus we had to write em in the fourth grade oman i thought poetry was stupid back then this is good yuh i likes it good meaning |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Becky; These glorious haikus do honor to our Lord! Beautiful! love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
WhtDove, I love the "Christian Haiku" theme you have come up with....but I love your depiction of Jesus' suffering for us more, with the two Haiku's you've written. Both are wonderful and very good. Yes, they are catching, aren't they? marcy |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, I really like these  The second one is especially great. And hey, what would nature be without God? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Rebecca! Powerful messages! Denise |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Amen to all thoughts expressed above. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
How do we ever thank Him enough for what He endured for us? This is so beautiful. Juls |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Rebecca, Your Haiku is about nature, The nature of HIS great love toward us. Beautiful poem! Dennis :^) |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
And so the fever spreads Becky!!! Wow, so few words, yet so powerful in their meaning. Beautiful job. Bonnie |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Beautiful. I need to get versed on this, but could never top yours, Dearie. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you all so very much! Mom, I sent you an email explaining how to do one. They're fun to do. And I'll bet you can top this. <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rebecca, a more thoughtful Haiku I do not believe could come from Adam, nor not Eve ... but should you incline before you rest this night's eve I am your relief |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 A couple of marvelous depictions of Christ on the cross in the form of haiku. A time in which nature was fully aware... Bob <>< |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So powerful and vivid. Great work, Rebecca. Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Call it whatever you like -- I call it a wonderful use of a poetic form-giving glory to our God & Saviour, David |
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gidget7 Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 52Arkansas, USA |
You described His pain so very well,so often we do not stop to actually think of the true anguish He suffered for us,the pain and humiliation,the suffering,and you said it all in so few words !!! I love it. |
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