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Seashore Rhapsody - Haiku

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-08-19 08:48 AM

Ocean waves singing
Your Name in my spirit here
Sea of Love fills me

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

1 posted 2000-08-19 09:12 AM

On this beautiful sunny morning, this is just the piece to cap it off Ellie. What lovely images this brought to mind. Simply wonderful. Bonnie

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-19 05:30 PM

This is so beautiful- the image, the thoughts. Thank you so much

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-08-19 05:55 PM

Beautiful Ellie! Haiku's are not easy, one's this pretty and meaningful are a treasure.

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

4 posted 2000-08-19 09:08 PM

A treasure indeed, Ellie, Just Beautiful, just like your heart. Love, Marcy

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

5 posted 2000-08-19 10:47 PM

How inspiring a setting & this haiku as well-
Your wells of inspiration just never dry up do they? Love, David

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

6 posted 2000-08-22 01:18 AM

I love the ocean and it does excite me as well... I think those crashing waves just exemplify the awesome power of God. I believe that when we get to Heaven, the Saints voices will be just like those crashing waves. Powerful!

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

7 posted 2000-08-25 10:30 AM

Ellie this gave off quite the picture in my mind. I could imagine myself sitting on the seashore....and that's not an easy task for me to accomplish. I have a hard time being anywhere accept where I am. Well done!

Denise

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8 posted 2000-08-26 06:57 AM

Beautiful!

Denise

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

9 posted 2000-08-26 11:49 AM

Ellie,
This poem is pleasing to the mind and spirit!
Dennis :^)

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