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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
the depth of His love simply amazing to me by His grace, I'm free ---------------- precious is the life that was given up for me His love is supreme ---------------- He whispers to me fear not the unknown my child you're never alone ---------------- Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Lone Wolf, Each one a jewel! With so few words, so much is said. Wonderful job and my favorite is... (and this is hard)...me thinks no. three. Loved them all! Love, Marcy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Lone Wolf; These little gems are superb! So beutifully said and wonderfully inspiring. Lovely works here. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Three little beauties LW....Simplicity at its finest! Bonnie |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can see that you're learning to stretch yourself LW. . . good job. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Lone wolf(who is never alone,haiku #3), t5his are all beautiful expressions of faith and truth written in the brief haiku style- you've done very well with these! David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I love these little things. So much said in such little wording. You've done an excellent job! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
All three haikus are beautiful gems! Well said and so very true! ![]() Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Within your heart reigns The essence of faith in Him Shared with each of us Enlightening Senryu's, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marcy . . .You never have to choose just one!! LOL. Thank you very much for the reply. ![]() Ellie . . .Thank you, I thought I would try something different. I just love reading here in Spiritual. BSC . . . Sometimes all we need are a few words to express it all. Thanks!! Bob . . . You are welcome and thank you for getting my point exactly. He is all that and so much more. ![]() Sven . . . Thank you my friend. I have to admit you kind of inspired me with your haiku in open. ![]() David . . . Thank you very much. And no, I am never truly alone . . . none of us really are. White Dove . . . I love them too. Fun to write. Thank you!! Melissa . . .Welcome back!! Thank you my friend. ![]() Marge . . . Awwww, thank you so much for the haiku. it is beautiful my friend. I am discovering my faith runs deeper than I thought. ![]() Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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