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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-10-09 05:55 PM

Stay my love.
Don't leave.
Be still and know
that I am your
Beloved Lord.
I will empty
your mind and heart,
so that you
will feel my Peace,
enfold your deepest
being,
as I embrace you
with my Love,
heightening your
senses,
to my passionate
eternal kiss of
Grace,
that you might
feel and know,
the fullness of
My Love for you.

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

1 posted 2000-10-09 08:10 PM

Ellie~ wonderful expression of his deep love

deb

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-10-09 09:26 PM

Ellie~
Just lovely thoughts.

'I will empty
your mind and heart,
so that you
will feel my Peace'

Yes ... and He has done that so many times with me.

Thank you for sharing these thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2000-10-09 09:35 PM

Ellie, you made this so lovingly personal...it is very, very nice...thank you...

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-10-09 10:03 PM

Ellie,

Beautiful sentiments. They are always there . . . we just have to accept Him.

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 2000-10-10 10:34 AM

Beautifully written Ellie! Fills the heart with warmth when reading it. I wonder if we'll ever grasp the full deepness of His love for us? But you've done an extremely well job explaining it.

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

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sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

6 posted 2000-10-10 09:30 PM

Oh how true these words are! When we've developed our faith to let go after asking His help with all we're able to do, we feel His presence so strongly within. You've said it so well and I thank you for sharing.

Winnifer Fayre
Junior Member

since 2000-10-05

Posts 13

7 posted 2000-10-10 09:47 PM

your poem echoes beautifully of so many of god's great promises! such as: "be still, and know that I am god" (psalm 46) and philippians 4 where paul promises us both "the peace of god" and "the god of peace." also revelation 4 where jesus sadly notes that the church has "lost [its] first love." oh, that human love were only as enduring as god's love--what happy folks we'd be!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2000-10-10 11:15 PM

Speaks straight to the soul through the eyes that rest upon the words you write. Wonderful and very uplifting.

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

9 posted 2000-10-11 08:52 AM

Oh Ellie - How beautiful!!! My heart smiled while reading this piece of your heart. Simply...lovely! Bonnie

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

10 posted 2000-10-11 09:48 PM

Perfection, ellie!! You have captured His peace and love so well. After reading Vicki's heart felt pain, this poem would be my answer to her. Just wonderful! Marcy

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