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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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You only do I seek with all my heart, That we may be as one, ne'er to depart Just as the tides rule seas in mighty ways You rule my soul completely all my days. Your waves of Grace wash gently on my shore, Debris of all my sin shall be no more. And as the sky turns gray o'er roiling sea, Fierce winds of change and storm filled memories, All vanish come Your Son's arising morn. Dawns birth of days, a new soul is reborn. A newborn babe now plays upon your shores; A child once more on wings of Grace doth soar. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ellie, this is absolutely beautiful! A lovely song indeed!! Denise |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Wow Ellie.....Beautiful, simply beautiful...and, it rhymes, we sure don't see much of that from you, but what a wonderful job you have done with this.... oh wow. Bonnie [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 10-21-2000).] |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Ellie, The music of God that touches our souls... This is truly a beautiful song... I look forward to reading more. Sheila |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
This is such a beautiful & picturesque song of Praise, complete with rhyme--Wow, a wonderful Song-from a beautiful soul- sung right on Key. Good work here, David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And as the sky turns gray o'er roiling sea, Fierce winds of change and storm filled memories, All vanish come Your Son's arising morn. Dawns birth of days, a new soul is reborn. A newborn babe now plays upon your shores; A child once more on wings of Grace doth soar. =================== ELLIE this is so beautiful with your harmonies and visions of nature.. most of all with the peace you find in your faith... thank you for sending me the beautiful card and for sharing it with me ... most of all for thinking of me. take care sweet poet jm |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, Beautiful praise and worship poetry, wonderful use of natures scenes for your illustrations of your relationship with God and His Son. I was blessed by the reading of this poem. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Ellie, WoW!!! I mean, Wow!! This poem says so much... "Your waves of Grace wash gently on my shore, Debris of all my sin shall be no more." When young people or new christians, with no exposure, to the teachings of God, think it impossible (or, expect it to be, too hard) to live a sin free life! ..and here you show...it is impossible and God doesn't expect us to be sin free or perfect.. (only know of One-Jesus)! Each time we ask Jesus to forgive our sins, "Debris of all my sin shall be no more." each day, each sin, he forgives and the sin is outta there!! You know I love this one! Sorry for rambling again...and again.. Marcy |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ellie~ I really like this. And what a song! Deb  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ How lovely are your phrases in His praise. 'Your waves of Grace wash gently on my shore' When the tide Oh, when the tide of His ever caring grace comes rolling in Across the shore of me I'll be washed forever free from my sins from my sins He's set me free When He lifts me to the land and holds me gently in His hand The tides of His salvation will set me free Oh, when the tide Oh, when the tide Of His salvation comes sweeping across the land I will go Yes, I will go I'll walk forever with Him in the land of promise that He made for me When His glory washes me on the shore so heavenly I will sing His praises yes, His praises for all eternity *Well, didn't you just inspire a song to come bursting forth from this heart. How can I thank you ? I just love it when that happens ! Bless you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ellie, What a beautiful adn harmonious song that you have shared with us here. I love this. My hat goes off to anyone who can inspire Marge to write an imprompu song!!  Marge, Loved your solo, gal. Marcy was right, he has inspired us all today. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 ...and I'll join in with bass..."O'er the rolling sea Upon the wayward tide O'er the rolling sea Upon the ocean wide O'er the rolling sea Upon the waves I'll glide O'er the rolling sea Unto my Savior's side..." Hey, what do You say... lets make "A Song to My God" together. I love making music for our Lord and Savior. What do You say, I really think we'll have a number one hit. God Bless You, Bob <>< |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ELLIE ~ Get your choir robe on ... we've got voices lifted in His praise going on ! Ellie ... where are you ? Bob~ I love it ... the very idea just makes me want to sing out loud ! Come to think of it ... that's what I'm doing ! Oh, He has filled our hearts with song ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Hey, you guys are so great! We've got a regular song feast going on here and I know Jesus is loving this. O'er the sea O'er the sea You and me You and me oh, how happy we'll be! You set us free set us free as we sing our song to Thee! ok, guys, we're cooking now! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
And your sweet song does soar through the heavens.Twirling delightfully as it enters the ears of our Lord. Bringing Him smiles and much joy. Simply lovely Ellie. Hugs, Juls |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ellie this is written beautifully! You rhymed it too....this is a rare treasure! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ellie, isn't it wonderful when the pleasures of God come forth in rhyme through your pen...this is beautiful... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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