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The High Priestess |
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Stacey New Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 9 |
The High Priestess He came to me in a dream Stood behind me with a touch so gentle Whispered in my ear Who is the High Priestess? Knowledge dark and sacred Rarely seen Only those who dare Tread the darkness of their own soul Shall the High Priestess know For her wisdom is true Dark depths within A sparkling of shadowlight On this night Only the chosen know Who the High Priestess is [This message has been edited by Stacey (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome to Spiritual!! I hope you'll enjoy being here and reading and replying to others as well. Please check your email for a special greeting! Hope we get to see more from you ![]() <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Your poem here with it's inquiry is intriguing- but I'm afraid I didn't understand the poem- or fail to know how to answer it--maybe you can shed some further insight. David |
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Stacey New Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 9 |
The first three lines of them poem are from a dream I had. The rest just flowed as I wrote. I guess comtemplation of the dream and knowledge of the subconcious. Thanks for your reply David. Stacey [This message has been edited by Stacey (edited 11-23-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Stacy...I loved this much, and I felt it portrayed the feminine face of god in a refreshing manner. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Stacey, This is an interesting poem cloaked with a veil of mystery. Welcome to spiritual Journeys! Dennis :^) < !signature--> Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 11-24-2000).] |
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Stacey New Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 9 |
Thank you Whtdove for taking the time to welcome me. Thank you Serenity and Dennis for the comments and welcome. That's so cool that you got that from my poem I changed it though and posted in critic section. Trying to improve my writing you know. I hope I did not lose the veil of mystery or the impression of the femine face of God Maybe ya'll could help me figure out which one reads better if ya'll get the time Hey did you write that verse at the bottom of your page Dennis If so I like it alot. Stacey [This message has been edited by Stacey (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Welcome Stacey ~ Intriguing piece, brings many mystical images to mind, look forward to seeing more of your work...read in CA too, gotta tell ya, love the word "shadowlight" Bonnie |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Stacey, I like the verse seperation in CA but I like this version better, You have asked a question, and have answered by saying "only the chosen know", although not a complete answer it closes the question/answer loop. My signature Haiku was written by me, thanks for your kind words. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Welcome Stacey; I like the mystery and the wonderment here also. Keep writing! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
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Stacey New Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 9 |
Thanks everyone for the comments. Stacey |
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