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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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W.W.W.W.W. & H. Wings whispering Haunting melodies Oh hear the Angels sing Wondrous Angels Hovering over Angels taking Troubles over Worries of the Heart Enlightened in the Night When you allow Heavens’ hosts E’re come in your heart, Really come in Ethereal beings all Worries to Hasten away Yes and (because) Heaven knows Only Wondrous things ©KRJ 8 September, 1999 ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very well done, Sunshine. Indeed, there is one answer to all those questions. Michael |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely Sunshine...... "Heaven knows Only Wondrous things" Those words bring such comfort..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Loved this Sunshine... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent, Sunshine! Loved it! ------------------ Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Michael, Ladies...I had posted so many spiritual pieces at another site, but never thought to keep them... would "Create" please set forward...? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Great one! Who, What, When, Where and Why... hmmn, can all be answered in one place! Enjoyed this! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whtdove, don't forget "How..." Thanks for reading... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Very good poem. very good use of an acrostic poem! I enjoyed very much! Great job! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Loved it. Thanks for sharing your inspirational talent with us. |
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Kenneth Ray Taylor Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 139Duluth, Minnesota, USA |
Cleverly written. I enjoyed it, but I had trouble understanding the stanzas before and after the "and (because)." Maybe I'm just thick. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
You are shining Sunshine  Jenny |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all for coming to read. |
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Midnight Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 28 |
Maybe I don't have any business saying this, because I'm not a really regular poster, but why is it that a person named suicidal dreams got yelled at for double posting his dark poem, but the happy poems about faith and love that are double posted are ok? I'm just wondering....and maybe I shouldn't drag up old posts for this reason, but I felt the need to. Sunshine, I think the poem was to restricted by the acrostic style here, but the last lines were good. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Midnight, Suicidal Dreams posted in two "active" forums. This poem was reposted from one of the no-longer active "archived" forums. We have always allowed people to bring back a post from the archives - but still, then, only to one active forum. I hope this clarify's the issue. I would also ask such issues be brought up in the Q&A forum in the future. It would probably recieve faster attention there. Secondly, I don't believe anyone "yelled" at Suicidal Dreams at all. Maybe you should reread the replies to the post you are speaking of...He was treated very nicely, actually, untill he started misrepresenting the issue in the Alley. An action, which by the way, he apologized for. Michael p.s. Sunshine, I still love this one. [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 01-01-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Michael, thank you again! I still like it too! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
I'll add my "I like it too" to that - along with an amen - all questions can be answered in one place indeed - loved the way you wrote this sunshine.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent Sunshine!!! I Loved it!!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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