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My brand new skin

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-20 01:55 PM

Adoration is your glory.
You proclaim it, you embrase it.
LORD, we owe it all to you.
Your so merciful and compassionate.
With my hands, I give your touch.
With my mouth, I give you praise.
With my hymn, I sing your mercy.
To show the world, my brand new skin.
Proclamation makes you happy.
When I vow, only to you.
No more kings or other loves.
I worship you, only you LORD.
With my spirit, I adore you.
Santifying my own body.
My soul, just born again,
I protect it with your help.
Thank you LORD, for your great
mercy and for giving us new life.
I embrase, Christ's coming everyday
of my life.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

1 posted 2001-02-20 05:12 PM

This is wonderful!
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With my spirit, I adore you.
Santifying my own body.
My soul, just born again,
I protect it with your help
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This has so inspired me!
Deb

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2001-02-21 11:34 AM

walker,

excellent praise and worship to our King of kings and Lord of lords...........
our Mighty God most high. I join you in my surrender. Bob <><

hey, and those new skins look pretty good on you!!!!!!

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2001-02-21 06:51 PM

Wonderful, this sounds like a glorious hymn and i join you in my gratefulness for the new being he has created in me too!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

4 posted 2001-02-22 05:27 PM

walker,

sorry.

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 02-22-2001).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-02-24 01:13 PM

Lovely piece, walker. There are more commas than you really need here. Read it again, aloud, for the flow. I think you'll be able to tell where to remove them.

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