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0 posted 2001-02-25 11:39 AM

Anxious to start her adventure,
She put on her soft denim jeans,
Then flew off to her favorite place,
Which was often a part her dreams;
Arriving, she perched on a mossy rock,
And dipped her toes in the pond,
Catching sight of a little frog,
As a squirrel sat by a small frond;
Her little wings swayed gently,
As she sat in her favorite place,
She held a soft, lop-eared bunny,
That nuzzled up close to her face;
Spring was just arriving,
In her secret little glade,
A kiss from a fawn brought giggles,
As down beside her he laid;
Soon there was a baby fox,
And a beautiful, miniature dove,
Surrounded by toddling creatures,
When from behind, she felt a shove;
A tiny, playful, pure white lamb,
Nudged gently to let her know,
It was time to leave her special place,
Though she didn’t want to go;
She silently got to her little feet,
Her delicate wings spread wide,
Saying goodbye to all her friends,
Through heaven she started to glide;
Over the clouds and through the stars,
Waving hello to the moon,
Holding a sweet remember,
Of the friends she’d see again soon.

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2001-02-25 12:02 PM

Aw, Bonnie: How gentle and sweetly soothing, just like your heart! I felt sooo peaceful reading this perfect little treasure. love, Ellie

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

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NEW ENGLAND, USA

2 posted 2001-02-25 03:11 PM

This is delightfully deliciouys--with such a cozy feeling to it. I loved it!
David

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

3 posted 2001-02-27 01:25 PM

Reminds of that place where the lion will be able to lie down with the lamb.. true peaceful existence.

Lighthousebob
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California

4 posted 2001-03-01 02:41 PM

Bonnie,

Your poem about the sweet little cherub is so tenderly descriptive and leaves no doubt about her childlike character and the personalities of all those little creatures. I liked the butting lamb the best. Adorable. Bob <><

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since 1999-07-22

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Illinois

5 posted 2001-03-04 10:48 PM

Bonnie this sweet poem fits those comfy jeans. What a beautiful place you've brought me to.

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD

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6 posted 2001-03-13 12:02 PM

Bonnie!!! This is precious...as you can see, I'm on the hunt for special poetry..with a special purpose.

May we publish this in our next newsletter?

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

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Idaho, USA

7 posted 2001-03-13 03:22 PM

This is sweet and your descriptive phrases make it easy to picture. I enjoyed it so much!

Betty Lou Hebert

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since 2001-02-11

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Florida

8 posted 2001-03-14 07:19 AM

What a good place to be. Thanks for sharing!

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

9 posted 2001-03-18 06:27 PM

How adorable. So sweet and charming I often think you really do have a canvas and brush unlike the keyboard I work from.

Reminds me of precious moments.
Bless you. Keep 'em coming.

Rae

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