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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Spring Small snow patches under trees Trenches formed from dripping eaves Tender lily sprouts peek out To sun themselves. It’s spring, no doubt. The wind still holds a frosty chill Darkness comes quite early still Hearts fill with anticipation In renewal of creation Coats worn in the morning’s cool Are forgotten after school. Bikes and jump ropes on the walk Neighbors, o’er back fences talk Mating birds, God’s praises sing As nests are built with mud and string Daffodils push up through earth Each creation shows great worth Dreams turn to long summer hours Beaches and vast fields of flowers Thorns will grow and bees will sting But God renews my faith each spring. |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
there's nopthing like spring to bring out the poet in us. I like this. Joyce |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh, how wonderfully lovely! I soooo love this time of year, and haven't you captured it delightfully! Love you....Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This certainly captures the flavor of early spring! Very nicely done. Betty Lou Hebert |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Yes, Joyce, it kind of musters up latent energies of all kinds this time of year. Thanks for reading and commenting. ellie, I just knew you'd love this time of year, 'cause you have a heart of appreciation, and could find some beauty in every season, or circumstance. ![]() Bless you, Rae |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Trillium, thanks for reading and commenting so kindly. The first snow is so refreshing, but so is the first sprout of spring. God bless, Rae |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Mom! This was beautiful!! One of your best! This just sang of life! I LOVE IT!!!! The flow on this is stupendous!! ~Excellent writing~ <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 03-21-2001).] |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sandgrain, I found your poem so very uplifting. I am afraid that winter has taken its toll on me and I do so look forward to spring. (Oh, it's here!!!) Such pleasant imagery! Thank you for uplifting my spirit with your gentle words of encouragement..... Bob <>< |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Whtdove, I'm humbled by your response. Thank you. Love, Mom Bob, Thanks for reading and commenting. Perhaps we all need to be shaken out of winters dulldrums. I find YOUR poetry very uplifting and inspiring, so feel extremely complimented that something I wrote uplifted you. God bless, Rae |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I found it, you can sumbit this to the main site. It's the little yellow icon up top there with the blue arrow. (to the right, by the email icon etc....) |
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Stephanos![]()
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3618Statesboro, GA, USA |
Sandgrain, I walked out into my back yard just the other day and the vividness of spring just hit me. Wow. Everything was so serene, yet alive! The colors were magnificent, the beauty overwhelming and comforting. Spring more than any season reminds me of the Lord our God since he is a God of ressurrection and new life. I was thinking how I wanted to write a spring-time poem to honor the season, but you beat me to it! LOL. I may still do so. Anyway, I really liked this. Stephen. |
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