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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Faced with life’s troubles Searching for a place to turn GOD answers knee mail |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How very good. Aren't we glad he does? Joyce |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thanks. I'm glad you liked the Senryu. My wife and I saw the last line on a Church street bulletin board and thought it needed to be spread. Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I liked this! Very clever last line. Betty Lou Hebert |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Melton; This is so clever and very inspiring in so few words...perfect! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Betty, ellie, Thank you. I thought the message was inspiring as well. Melton |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Perfect, and oh so true! I like to read short poems, especially one that grabs my attention like this one. Deb |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Melton, Very clever; knee mail instead of E-mail and I like the senyru form as well. Bob <>< |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I've heard that last line before but I really like the way you incorporated it in this short, sweet piece. Rae |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL, that's a good one! I've not heard that before, but it sure is catchy. Thanks for spreading it around!  |
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