My God's Praise=My Life Message

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My God's Praise=My Life Message

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2001-04-18 06:26 AM

M ay I make it my Life Message
A lways, each and every day,
Y our Praises that I sing aloud

T o the world, and on display.
H oly Father, Almighty One,
Y ou condescend to bless mankind,

G iving us Thy Precious Son
O h may this I e'er keep in mind!
O f the things I am and have
D are I claim them as my own?
N o, all my Gifts come from above
E ach reflect of the Love You've shown.
S oul and Savior come from Thee
S o I but to thy Goodness cling,

B ut for God, I would not be
E nergize me, Thy Praise to sing!

M y LORD, my life, my being all
Y ou entrusted to me, so free,

P raise be to Thy Matchless name
R ecieved now and eternally!
A lways and ever, each day I live
I seek that through all my ways,
S o clearly seen, my Gratitude to Thee
E videnced by Your non-stop Praise.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2001-04-18 06:51 AM

David; A magnificent acrostic praise poem! I am blessed to begin my day with these powerful and humble words of praise. You have written this with eloquence and beauty, as is your style and your heart. Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-04-18 05:46 PM

This is not easy to do and you did it so beautifully. Joyce

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-19 11:04 AM

I love acrostic poems! You did a wonderful job on something that's not simple. Great job! Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

4 posted 2001-04-20 09:44 PM

David,

I think this acrostic is Great!!!

You have kept a good flow throughout your poem and you where able to rhyme as well as begin each line with a letter to spell out your message......"May Thy Goodness Be My Praise" and that alone is a wonderful message for us all. God is so very-very good to us. Bob <><

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