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Tears of Grace - Haiku - Senryu |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Ice tears of Winter then become the Spring showers replenish the earth As the tears I shed are filled with Your Loving Grace to flower my soul A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 04-26-2001).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ellie in a way this is sad. But you've left me with a remarkable image.  Well written!  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Remarkable words |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very well done! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Perfectly beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
beautifully done and they merge in harmony. God bless Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Ellie ... such wonderful imagery contained in so few words, very nicely written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I felt that these short verses were expressions of a great faith in God to take something cold and brittle and change it into showers of blessing that will bring forth lovely flowers. I do believe that your shed tears will not be for naught in your life, but that your heart will bloom forth in blessings as well. God Bless You, Bob <>< |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
These images are really great; i am moved. Keep contributing! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Truly enriched verse, yet sad I fear. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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