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Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
It's rained, and rained, and rained some more The Angels cry outside my door For Mother's gone and passed away Sorrow abides here every day The halycon days of youth are done And now I find there's no more fun No one to talk to, no one to ask Of foolish things done in the past Or share the dreams of future days Now all of this is gone away No one to just run off to town to buy some bauble or just to drown Our sorrow's in a cup of joe And now my life's so full of woe For it's rained and rained here every day Since Mother's gone and passed away The Angel's cry outside my door I just may join them, for what's one more |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Lisa, what a tender piece of your heart you have penned...How well I know the feelings....Sadly beautiful poem. Bonnie |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Lisa: I'm sorry you are going through such a sad experience. It's worse when it's raining! Seems like the world is crying too. Life does get better with time. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lisa this is a lovely, sad poem. My mother has been gone for 25 years and I miss her still every day. There are so many things that she and I could talk aboout and there is no one who fills her place. Joyce |
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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me |
God has given you angels that will listen and console. I'm sorry about your mother, it's hard when you have no one to talk to, but just remember God's crying with you. You also wrote a good poem. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Lisa, What a loving and precious tribute to your mother... I'm blessed that you have such fond memories... sometimes I imagine what it would have been like to have been with mine, but she died when I was two years old. I do believe that she is a part of me even though. I do hope that the rain will stop and the clouds will clear soon so you can enjoy some sun-shiny days as well. Bob <>< |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I too feel your pain. my mother has been gone ten years, and i still want to have her here to talk with. May God send some human Angels into your life to be a comfort and joy to you.This is a beautifully written poem. Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome to the forums! I'm sorry to hear of your sad times. May God bring you some comfort and peace! ![]() <*\\\>< |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lisa, Very sad and touching write. It's never easy to let them go. There are many times in my life I wish my mom were here to talk to, but that just isn't possible. Luckily, God has sent me one of those Angels Ellie mentioned. She is very special to me although no one can ever take my mom's place. Great write here. Welcome to Passions. LW All writing comes |
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Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
Thank you all for the kind words. My Mom died 3 years ago so the pain is less frequest this was written a week after she died. As you all probably fiqured out. Thank you all again. Lisa |
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Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
Thank you all for the kind words. My Mom died 3 years ago so the pain is less frequent. This was written a week after she died. As you all probably fiqured out. Thank you all again. Lisa |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
lovely piece...but soo sad...i liked the poem. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Wonderful poem. Writing and sharing your poetry definetly helps. Melton [This message has been edited by 2dalimit (edited 07-06-2001).] |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Lisa...it seems as if the wound never "heals" it just gets easier to deal with...I still miss my grandmother and go to call her sometimes...lol...but thank God we can see them all again one day...Rod Love one another-let God do the worrying, |
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