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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA ![]() |
truE facE hE, who controls flame bending itS wretched will hE, who casts no shadow in the brightest of days walks, without touching the earth and wears the Mark upon hiS hand Affix a penny upon thy lips and listen for the coyote to scream You are safe, on consecrated ground bound, on all sides by saltwater the grimmest of nights is yet to fall so be ye prepared! When the wrath of hiS ung*dlY wayS undoes the good of man and dares to share itS truE facE! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome to PIP Shadow Rider! This brings to mind many scriptures. ![]() Nicely brought together. I hope we get to see more from you! Check your email for a special welcome. <*\\\>< |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
W E L C O M E ! A very nice first post.... you have a unique signature to your poetry that I like putting capital letters at the end of some words. This poem has a certain specter/phantom feel to it as I believe you describe the Anti-Christ walking without touching the earth and the coyotes really add to the mood. Yep, gave me goose pimples all over. Bob <>< |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Welcome to the site and hope you'll stick around. Good poem! Has an ominous atmosphere to it, which of course it should, given the subject matter. will look for more of your work. Betty Lou Hebert |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Very genuine. Your description of darkness is well written. I know that I felt shadows near me. Goosebumps as well! But fear not for he will never leave thee nor forsake thee. Welcome to Spiritual Forums! Sincerely, Rwood With all things considered, why not God? |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Welcome to our corner. Hope to see more of your work. Joyce |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, yes, the capitals at the end of the words referring to hiM, totally the opposite of how we type referring to God certainly adding to the definition of God's antithesis well done, extremely!!! ![]() ![]() |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Aw guys, I am so warmed by all of your welcomes, and kind words! White Dove: That was the nicest gesture, showing me the card, and was so unexpectedly delightful. Indeed: there were multiple scriptures imbedded into this as you surmised! Thank you, White Dove, for being so kind! To Lighthouse Bob: (great name BTW *s*) you have heard of accentuating the 'positive', well, I guess I was accentuating the extreme negativE here. I greatly appreciate your WELCOME. My best to you as well, Amigo. Trillium: so very pleased that you enjoyed this. I do enjoy spiritual writing. Will be posting again soon, if y'all don't mind. ~smiling~ The concept of hiM being here, send chills down my spine, too. Please, have a greaaaat day! Grateful thanks! RoseWood: I loved your reply. . . awwww I have felt those demons close their dark talons around my heart all too frequently. I dwell in the spirit of Light, in fear that darknesS may overtake me. You are ultra kind, in your welcome! Thank you! Joyce: And what a splendid corner of the world 'tis, Joyce! Truly a warm, and close knit forum of inspiration. Thanks for reading, Joyce. and to VAS: you nailed the meaning of the letters, to a 'T' and I am so thrilled with that. The opposite of Him is unfortunately hiM, but we know who wins, don't we? grin after all, we have read the ending of the Book. That was a great response, VAS. Merci beaucoup, mon frere. |
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