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As A Sky Falls

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

0 posted 2001-07-17 08:36 PM

"As a Sky Falls"

it broke a covenant with G*d
and fell
crashing to eartH
scattering its white lifeblood
in invisible curtseys
and last bowS.
no one noticeD
no one cared to care
when heaven touched the soil
and a new congress was made
kindled by interlinked coexistencE
so subtle it was missed by mortal eyeS
only seasons of withering felt the nuance
of an alien invasion
of moralitY.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2001-07-18 02:30 PM

Wonderfully visual abstract poetry displayed here...... I'm afraid we do so often take for granted the many covenants that God has made with humanity like keeping the sky in its proper place as humanity goes on living life like there is no God. Truely written, the sky should surely fall considering the morality seen in the world today. Your poem touched my heart in a somber way. Bob <><

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-07-18 06:47 PM

This hits me as in when Satan was cast down from Heaven. Wow! The invasion is true. Never thought of it that way. The attack was started at that very moment of touch down. Tell me if I'm way off base. Thanks!
Sincerely,
Rwood

With all things considered, why not God?

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2001-07-19 07:53 PM

This has great impact! Really well worded and written.

Betty Lou Hebert

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