»
Archives
»
Spiritual Journeys
»
Waves Of Grace - Senryu
| Spiritual Journeys |
|
Waves Of Grace - Senryu |
|
|
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
|
Graceful ocean waves wash upon this inner soul clensing all debris A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
||
| © Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I love the ocean and these spiritual waves of which you write are even more lovely. -Bob |
||
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely. Joyce |
||
|
Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
His love feels as ocean waves clearing out all the silt...leaving a freshness that only He can...loved this Ellie!  |
||
|
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, yes! amen! |
||
|
Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Thank you for this gem, Ellie. I thought I'd reply to this to let you know that I found this senryu very inspirational somehow. It sparked the idea in my mind for a villanelle that I wrote today. Thank you for helping me dust off my pen. Yours, ~Allan Blood Moon |
||
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is so inspirational for me. I find the ocean very therapeutic! Betty Lou Hebert |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yes they do! How beautiful! Liz |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A wonderful senryu, Ellie You used an excellent metaphor to inspire. I have always viewed the ocean and rain as God's renewal This is a perfect senryu!~ Melissa~ |
||
|
Stephanos
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3618Statesboro, GA, USA |
Oh how I need this! Thanks for the reminder. I think I've seen alot of debris lately in me. Stephen. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
