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That Tree Of Calvary by Andrea Michaud age 11 |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
The Tree Of Calvary by Andrea R. Michaud age 11 Here I am standing here waiting. I want to see Your holy face looking back at me, though I know I can't because of that tree of Calvary. Here I am weeping for Your love. Can't you hear me crying out? I want to know your love, Oh Lord, though I know You can't because of that tree of Calvary. Here I am. Will you hold me tight with that love I've always known? Will you love me forever in a day though I know You can't because of that tree of Calvary? ~Andrea |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a very wonderful poem, Andrea. But He can. That tree of Calvary did not defeat him.. Good job. Joyce |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Joyce, My poem is about Mary and how she felt. ~Andrea |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andrea~ What a tenderly written piece of your heart. In giving her son ... Mary had to have felt great anguish. You have shown that so deeply in your poem. Bless you, sweet child of God. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Dear Marge, Thank you for reading my poem. ~Andrea |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
this one made me cry. i feel kinda the same way.i just want him to take me in his arms and hold me. robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Robin, I was really the same way. I felt a lot of emotion. The wierd thing is that I cried too. ~Andrea [This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 08-17-2001).] |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is a fine poem. You are surely an inspiration to those around you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is a fine poem. You are surely an inspiration to those around you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Andrea, this is a lovely poem - You've done a great job here. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful poem, when we learn whose point of view it is. Mary had to accept the path of her son because of God's great love for all. Oh how important it is for us, then, to accept the love of that sacrifice. Keep writing Andrea, you are well beyond your years IMO. Someone has surely touched your heart. ![]() |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
I thought I had replied to this earlier-I apologize for my carelessness in not getting it done. Andrea, You are to be commended for this lovely poem. It has a wonderful message, and shows potential on your part, perhaps a God-given ability like Bob , which you should seek to cultivate and use for the Lord's glory. God bless You and keep up the Good work. P.S. Bob, I'm sure you are proud of her and have every right to be ![]() Every Day's a Blessing And Gift-Wrapped from Above, Share it with another And Spread the Father's Love!!! May You come to Know His Best Blessing [This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 08-19-2001).] |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Trillium, Thank you for saying that about me. It really made me feal good. ~Andrea Nan, Thank you. ~Andrea VAS, You're right we do need to understand God's love for us. I will keep on writing. And someone has touched my heart, God has touched my heart. ~Andrea deleeme, That's OK, Thank you for writing. ~Andrea |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i was reading and i remebered a verse that i think you should read. psalms 91:11 robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How happy you must be to be a child of God and know your Savior. How proud your father must be. Thank you for sharing this with us ![]() Homepage : http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm |
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