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BSC

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since 2000-02-04

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New York, USA

0 posted 2001-10-26 10:36 AM

I went outside this morning
just to feel the crisp fall air,
As snowflakes started drifting down,
that's when I saw You there ~
You were gazing at the stately pine
now dressed in dusty white,
And feeding sparrows from Your hand,
As You showed Your gentle might ~
Your smile reflected tenderness
As You watched the squirrels at play,
I felt a warmth from inside out
when at last You looked my way ~
I saw the twinkle in Your eye
as You nodded toward the fawn,
And You danced as if to music
when the rooster welcomed dawn ~
You laughed out loud at chipmunks
and the grumpy old raccoon,
Who was startled when the dayshine
replaced the morning moon ~
You came to me with open arms,
a grin upon Your face;
Yes,I stepped outside this morning,
and was greeted with Your Grace.

[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 10-26-2001).]

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-26 10:53 AM

How absolutely stunning. I could feel such joy filling each word. You write with a reverance that is tangible. Thank you for sharing the beauty of this poem.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2001-10-26 11:07 AM

Exqisitely done, Bonnie! You know His Love and and Bring the fullness of that Love into our hearts with your beautiful poetry. Thank you! Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Wanda
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

3 posted 2001-10-26 11:26 AM

Bonnie; You have painted such a lovely picture with your words of poetry. Thank you for a wonderful read. Wanda

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2001-10-26 01:52 PM

Touched my heart Bonnie...enjoyed...hugs

~Victoria~

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-10-26 05:49 PM

How wonderful. Joyce

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-10-26 10:26 PM

Bonnie: This is so joyous and descriptive. I could see the scene!

Betty Lou Hebert

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

7 posted 2001-10-28 09:42 PM

A very tender melodic poem... I love how all nature rejoices in God Grace.

-Bob

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

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Minnesota

8 posted 2001-10-31 06:19 PM

What better way to start the day?

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

9 posted 2001-11-01 09:10 PM

Wonderful! You drew me right into the picture.

Stephanos

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since 2000-07-31

Posts 3618
Statesboro, GA, USA

10 posted 2001-11-02 04:23 PM

I loved the "romantic" feel of this. You chose a very creative way to express your praise.

Stephen.

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