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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2001-11-01 03:37 PM

Deep Understanding

Sometimes it feels like star dust
Written across the sky
Just doesn't seem to be enough
For all my questions why?
Rainbows in my memories
Like multicolored dreams
Somehow never rise above
The darkness of my schemes.
As I contemplate on life
And all that I have been,
I'm most grateful for the Truth
That speaks to me within.

-Lighthouse Bob

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-11-01 08:52 PM

This poem is heartfelt.. these lines..
As I contemplate on life
And all that I have been, ..have personal meeting to me as I have been doing alot of this lately. I really like your poetry, I guess you know that by now.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-11-01 11:30 PM

Fine poem Bob! I enjoyed it so much!

Betty Lou Hebert

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

3 posted 2001-11-02 01:04 PM

Bob; I am most grateful for the Truth, too, that has touched and changed my life. This was a heart warming poem and I enjoyed it very much. Wanda

Stephanos

Member Elite

since 2000-07-31

Posts 3618
Statesboro, GA, USA

4 posted 2001-11-02 04:12 PM

Very good poem. I am grateful that the Holy Spirit brings us light even though it reveals our own darkness. That's why the truth is a bitter sweet experience (until we are perfected)... but a blessing without price.

Stephen .

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-11-03 12:53 PM

I have seen this poem in another forum and found it interesting there as well as here. Joyce

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-11-07 10:29 PM

I can relate to this one as well, Bob. You've written it well, my friend.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

7 posted 2001-11-08 02:33 PM

I wasn't sure where you were going with this one at first, but the ending brought it all together. Great job.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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