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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-07-20 02:04 PM

Everyday... is like a rush
Of water... flowing... toward the ocean,
Flowing toward... the same destiny-
Death... and eternity.

To some... this is a dead sea,
Life is all... but a storm...
Of weather and there is no more.
To some... this is a living pool,
Life is all... but a bless...
From God and we hereafter with Him.

Some... rush through the wave without much...
Of enjoy and thankfulness.
Some... flow too slow in the stream
And miss out... the joy of slide.

Some... try to reverse... the current...
(But take a guess, what happens?)
They do not success much...
For life is about acceptance.
Some... face the weather far too gray
And miss out joy of life...

We are... all living... in this blue ocean.
We are... all pulling... and pushing...
one another side by side...
We have... our choice... of choosing... our life.
We have... the same... destination...
Toward the Lord.

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-20 10:33 PM

(smiles) Yes, the river only flows and currents one direction and that direction will lead us all off into the calm ocean of dreams and love where we will always go clear sailing! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2002-07-20 11:02 PM

Eliza: There is such widsom in your poem and I think your poetry is growing and developing all the time. Very nicely done.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-07-21 10:07 PM

I do love the way you express yourself with poetry. Joyce

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2002-07-22 06:35 PM

thanks Joyce. I feel all kind of waves sometimes.

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

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