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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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What good is Your truth If we all believe in lies? What good is Your light If we all close our eyes? What good is salvation If we wish not to be cleansed? What good is Your mercy If we cling to our sins? Why did You come here And offer Your grace To those who reject You And spit in Your face? You who were innocent You who were pure You were bound by our sins How could You endure? When I think of Your love My heart fills with shame That all of my wrongs Were stamped with Your name My Father, You are The ultimate King And to be in You service Is to gain everything. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a fantastic poem!!!! ...with a wonderful message...and the rhyme and words flow so very well... very nice work..very true words. take care, janet marie |
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thumper4him Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 27Newport Beach Ca |
I think this is a perfect example of a poem of a christian poet. It flows, it makes sense, easy to read. And a wonderful message for christians and non-christians alike. you can't make footprints in the sand of times that you are sitting down |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Your poem is so good, and so true!!! Keep up the good work! "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOW! This will make you stop and think! I love it! Awesome to think that he loves his children so much, that he could offer his grace and forgiveness, even after what they/we did to him. <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Lyric beauty and simplicity. Perfect poem. Thank you so much. |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
WOW!!! Now this is what I call a powerful poem. It flows so beautifully. Clear, concise and to the point. NO mistaking it's meaning. |
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Cross my heart New Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 5Finland |
GREAT!! You really have a way with the words! I often feel like I'm not worth His grace and yet He loves us, His children so much, even me! You put that in words so beautifully! He really has blessed you with a wonderful gift! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Fantastic! We often talk of God's unconditional love for us, but contemplating Job, beset with so many problem of such magnatude, really makes us aware of unconditional love from our perspective to better appreciate the awesomeness of God's. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
You hit the nail on the head- and said it very well--I join with my colleagues to thank you for a worthy poem with a timely message. "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
Wonderful! Yes, great message, and so simply but poetically put! I really enjoyed it, and hope to read more of your work! |
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