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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow ![]() |
A Voice I'm sitting in this boat sailing across the sea the tides that rocked me gently are turbulent now. I don't know where I am which way do I go? This is not supposed to happen to me I'm scared can anybody help me? Nobody around to help I'm all alone I hear a voice where's it coming from? It's telling me I'm not alone I hear it say, relax and I will guide you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very,very lovely Lost Dreamer...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
How beautiful Lost Dreamer...thanks for sharing this ![]() Jenny Lee |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Lovely Lost Dreamer. : ) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, LD. I enjoyed this. It had a relaxing quality to it! ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, LD - There's not much of a choice out there at sea, is there? |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
LD...when all is quiet and all alone we can hear that voice leading us on...nice work. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
And that voice does guide, if we are willing to listen. Beautiful poem, L.D. I get a sense of comfort in reading it. Michael |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I thank all of you for your kind responses. I wrote this poem about a year ago and it is one I truely enjoy and get a relaxed feeling from also. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
You give a very valuable point here...It seems a lot of times when we are alone or even just feel alone, your scared, you dont know what to do, and anything else like this...when you hear a voice (Many of which it is God speaking to them) it is a comforting peace to know He is there with you and you are not alone. Cause He will surely guide you where you need to be, calme your fears, relax your heart, and be a friend when you are lonely. It is always such a blessing to know He is there. Amen to this poem! Truly enjoyable! Thank you for sharing! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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