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Signs along the Road of Life |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. ![]() |
Signs along the Road of Life Signs along the road of life, Gives us reason to inspect, If they warn of perilous dangers, T'would be foolish to neglect! YIELD!, to a loving Savior, Whose compassion runs deep and wide, If you but heed his instructions, He'll guide you safely to the other side. ONE WAY!, Our dear Savior whispers, Through Him, He's the truth and the Life, No other way to the Father, It'll save you much grief and great strife. NO U-TURNS!, a sign often warns, Continue on that narrow strait path, For MANY will go in the Broad Way, To Destruction, to suffer Gods' Wrath! DETOUR AHEAD! is a warning, Calamities will often assail, We must continue to let JESUS guide us, Past hard times on our pilgrim trail. STOP!, don't forget to praise Him, With our words, our actions, our deeds, For we'll be truely blest in obedience, And He'll supply all our Traveling needs. < !signature--> Poetry is the expression of thoughts which awake the higher and nobler emotions, or their opposites, with words arranged to some accepted convention.........or maybe not! Dennis :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 03-03-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dennis, this is SO great, creative and imaginative...and inspirational in its message...nice work!!!jm |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Dennis: This poem is packed with all we need to know, and very inspirational.Beautifully written too, Dennis! Thank you, Ellie 02 |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was a really cool way to put it! I like that, shall not look at a street sign the same way again. LOL |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Dennis, this is a great poem with a wonderful message. You were very creative here with your approach. I loved it, and with your permission I am going to post it on my own website. Well Done, Bro. (no fluff here!) David "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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LoveBug![]()
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a great poem and a great message! Keep up the good work! "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
Dennis what a cool way of looking at our journey! i like it how you did each stanza for a road sign, and based it all on truths within the bible - and your ryhming is so good! Well i certainly won't look at a road sign in the same way either! (but that's a good thing.) |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
No matter how long the journey, it will never be quite the same....I'll remember your signs as I go along the way....Thanks for sharing such a great piece of poetry. |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Oh, Dennis! This was so creative and true and I could tell you put alot of thought into it and it was fun to read and I ENJOYED SOOOOOO MUCH! Great message here. Makes me feel like shouting, "Happy Travels, Y'all!" ![]() |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Wow! How wonderfully done. Street signs have a whole new meaning for me. Brilliant! Sincerely, Rwood |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I echo all the above! Well done, Dennis!! Denise |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Dennis, Great poem! Yelp, follow the signs. Your words of wisdom nicely put. Alle' |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thanks for all your kind words, We journey together on this pilgrim road, may the words from this verse somehow lighten your load. Thanks again, friends. Dennis :^) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I agree with rwood ... this IS brilliant Dennis !!! ![]() Your brother told me of your wonderful talent .... and I do agree ... I enjoyed this much ....... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thank you dear Pepper, and I hope you are feeling well, your new friend Dennis :^) |
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