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Watching me

Andreja Nikki
Junior Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 18

0 posted 2000-03-06 09:21 PM

The lake lies ahead calm and serene,
It's gentle waves rush to greet the shore,
I look above,
The clouds begin to break,
A sunset splashes the sky with color,
As I look back to the lake,
I see color dashing across the water's surface,
I again look to the sky,
And smile,
I know that god is there,
Watching me.

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

1 posted 2000-03-06 09:55 PM

You have captured a beautiful setset in words. It's God's beauty awsomesome and to feel His presence in your soul! Great Poem
Marcy

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

2 posted 2000-03-06 09:57 PM

Peaceful and gorgeous scene! Wonderful.
Sincerely
Rwood

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

3 posted 2000-03-07 05:21 AM

Oh the serenity of a soul at peace, mirrored by the beauties of the external and mirroring the perpetual delightful presence of the Eternal. Your poem is delightful in many ways. Andreja, we welcome you here and look forward to more poetic feasting. David

"Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2000-03-07 06:14 AM

dear Andreja; A lovely poem of peaceful serenity and beautifully written. You have captured the wonder of His creation. Can't wait to read more of your poems. Ellie

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 2000-03-07 08:47 PM

This describes a serene but breath taking view! Beautiful!

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There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

6 posted 2000-03-09 07:57 PM

Everything in God's creation reminds us of His watchful presence when our hearts are turned toward Him. Your words paint a masterpiece of love from the Master. Thank you.

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