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The Trail |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I walk a trail That was blazed By those who first Visioned the destination Of the journey With sickle and saw They cut a path Through the thickets Of the wood First guided by a star Then by the sun. The hand soled shoes Of all who followed On that path Packed the sod Leaving a trail That was unmistakable Onward they traveled On weary dusty feet As brambles reached Out to snare them, Harsh winds threw Branches and sometimes Logs across their path With strong wills And faith to do The impossible They climbed over Under, and through Whatever obstacle Was flung across Their path Their determination Kept moving them Forward At times their feet Moved slowly through Wet clay swamp trails Then struggling to mount Vast hills Hungry and tired Thoughts of turning back Sometimes crossed their minds Yet then the vision of the journey's end Persuaded them gently to go on Sometimes temptation spoke "Turn around go back!" This thought was jarred by The reality The distance back Was further Then the distance home.. [This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 03-12-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
My dearest Septsong; Oh,WOW! I'm still catching my breath dear friend. This was like reading a song and the hidden meaning of those before us blazing a trail fo faith for us to follow. Wow again. Sept, you have such a fantastic poetic spirit and a beautiful soul. my love to you dear friend, Ellie 02 |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Nicely written. A 15yr.old girl sent me a spiitual poem saying she didn't know anyone else in her life who'd appreciate it. I cried. The trailblazers encouraging us on, mean so much and your poem brings it out. Thank you. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Very well done. The struggles of our forefathers and their strength compell us to move forward..even in spiritual growth. The ending is so true. Wonderfull! Sincerely, Rwood |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent, Septsong! So full of truth and inspiration! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOW! Great work! |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
WOW Septsong, This is beautiful, what a tribute to all of those who blazed the trails for us, and a great way to help us to remember to do all we can for those who will come after us..... Thanks Bonnie |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
i love this message. it reminds me of what Paul said in Phil. 3:13-14 and I Cor. 9:24-27 running the race towards heaven with the cloud of witnesses all around. Steve Green wrote a wonderful song on this topic, too. you have captured this same message clearly and beautifully. |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Everyone has already replied and said the things I wish to. WOW! Is this ever wonderful and full of Inspiration! Kim |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This is really beautiful, and what a powerful message! Reading this touches a place in me - days like today make me want to just *pack up my tent and go home*....after reading this, I have a small spark of courage to carry on. Thank you...I think I'll read it again, to let it sink in a bit deeper. ![]() |
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