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I Am Helpless |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest ![]() |
Mirrors of darkness with images surreal Mirrors of pain make me turn away Images to real with rage to gaze upon Inflamed by wrong passions said to be true Escaping them impossible to do I try to hide Rising above gives way to a heaviness suffocating My dreams no longer allowed to be envisioned Oppressions cloud set in, pulling me down to drown My childhood is gone seeing no way back Foggy mist consumes the way I am lost Hard to breathe here in this expanse Too much for me to bear and care My cells cease to function normally I loose consciousness of time Arresting the very core of my being I forgot who I am Only a miracle can bring me back to life The SON must thaw this frozen soul Only HE can send the fire to burn this dross Crying from the center of a bitter heart Comes the scream for help I am helpless |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOW! This is sad, and yet it's not without hope! He can melt the frozen heart, he can touch the feeling within and bring those 'dry' bones back to life! For he is the living waters! Very well written and touching deep within! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Deeply moving! So desperate, yet the last verse brings hope, "Only a miracle can bring me back to life The SON must thaw this frozen soul Only HE can send the fire to burn this dross Crying from the center of a bitter heart Comes the scream for help" a miracle asked for, believing, a miracle received. Very well written. Marcy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Avery dark place to be. Yet I hear your hope and God will lift you out of this, It's a promise. This poem is beautifully written, Illusion, so keep writting and stay here in this forum so we can all love you into Joy! Love, Ellie 02 |
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