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Forrest Cain
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since 2000-04-21

Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA

0 posted 2000-05-02 08:16 PM

               Eternities Cloak

                  endless
                 the night
             in eternities cloak
    beyond horizons of life`s shallow scope
           in blue shadows waking
            athwart at the stars
               indelibly woven
                the signature.

Jester59701
Member

since 2000-02-29

Posts 154

1 posted 2000-05-02 09:01 PM

Wow! Forest, That's deep! Nice expression, that's one powerful signature.
Jester

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

2 posted 2000-05-02 10:58 PM

I second the WOW! I like your intriging title also.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2000-05-02 11:02 PM

Another WOW! from me too. Wondrous poem, thought provoking and very original. Ellie

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Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

4 posted 2000-05-03 12:28 PM

Hi Forrest,
I love the poem, with its simplicity but I must admitt, I can't wait for you to tell me
your meaning, as I will grow with understanding. I hope my honest answer does not offend, but because of its beauty I don't want this to be just beautiful words to me, I want to feel your thoughts. Marcy

son of man
Member

since 2000-04-25

Posts 125

5 posted 2000-05-03 12:58 PM

one more wow for me too. this poem is beatiful. i think i can say i'm on the same wavelength, because of the way i understand it so easily. i could be wrong about its meaning to you, but to me it says that gods supernatural signature is on everything that remains a mystery to us. it will always be"cloaked" in mystery to make us realize his divine design even more.
whether i'm right or wrong about your meaning, its still a thoughtful poem.
great job!

Forrest Cain
Member

since 2000-04-21

Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA

6 posted 2000-05-03 03:14 AM

I thank you all for your very kind
comments. Marci essentially I``m saying
when you look at all the infinite beauty
and mysteries around us. You are seeing
God and the eternity of him. Son of man
comments are on the money.

thanks forrest

BSC

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Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

7 posted 2000-05-03 08:17 AM

Forrest - Awesome, simply....awesome!!! Bonnie

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

8 posted 2000-05-03 10:27 AM

Forrest your use of words is amazing! It really is pure beauty you've poured out here.

I love every line of this!

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Our background and circumstances may have influenced who we are, but we are responsible for who we become.

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

9 posted 2000-05-03 01:35 PM

Thanks Forrest
Some of us in here (me) needs a crutch every so often. Now that I understand, the beauty of your poem takes on life for me. How awesome this is, Breathtaking! Thank you.
God Bless
Marcy

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