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Thebaer
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since 2007-03-18
Posts 10
0 posted 2007-03-20 09:30 PM

I see rose hips dotting my school hallways
The reconstructed sums given in love
But now only remnants left in way
This holiday brings me no sadness
Only neutralism and memories I care to leave behind
The latter of which I would care to complete
Rather than receive anything of loving feat.
© Copyright 2007 Barry Ervin - All Rights Reserved
dollmaker
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since 2006-08-30
Posts 155
mass dorchester
1 posted 2008-02-05 02:55 PM

lovely but it is sad.. nice work. great images.
dollmaker
GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
2 posted 2008-11-26 01:06 AM

Emotional-yes. Sad-not so much. I enjoyed it.
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