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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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Wake not my soul as it lies sleeping Peaceful in the fire's ember Dreaming of a dance of passion Dancing in the lets-remember Slowly it begins to die Victim of a glowing coal Never knowing death upon it-- Sleep you gentle...dreaming soul... --dgvarner < !signature--> "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgV, This is so sweet and melodic. You write so well! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
dennis..wow..thanks! and coming from you that means so much!! thank you thank you  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This is so beautiful dg, every single line is perfect. Wonderful writing. Bonnie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thank you so much bonnie!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- wow! love this. short and sweet, but, true to your form, powerful.  love ya, tricks "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- wow! love this. short and sweet, but, true to your form, powerful. love ya, tricks "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Another beauty |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks: thanks tricks: thanks (heehee) jamie: thanks for reading me!! youre keeping me busy tonite!! enjoying all replies!! keep it up--you guys are boosting my ego right up and up there!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Your writing is deep and meaningful DGV,the blossom of your talent is blooming,the flower will be bright indeed. Jon |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jon: deep am i.... *sigh*.... thanks for your wonderful reply--it means so much nothin like being noticed as i bloom...  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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