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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Moon follows slowly It's futureless face staring Watch every move |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wonderful haiku Maria! I can just see it my mind. I can't wait to read more  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Moon follows slowly It's futureless face staring Watch every move Phases come and go Still, it watches in darkness All seeing, knowing. loved yours... I have a great love for the moon ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I like this, quietly sinister... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Lakewaker- Thanks Maureen- Love the ending Allen- I have a dark side "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wow,Maria, never seen a haiku that portrays the moon as dark and eerie...this haiku is real creative |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Kaile- Thanks again And I just watch one to many horror films What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mmmmmoooon... *_6 haunting, Maria.. lovely.. Yeah, hehe.. I love the night.. -LC |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Maria ~ nice haiku... is always a little strange when fate or coincedense pops up likethis... looking forward to your horror story. Steve B“The union of the mathematician with the poet, fervor with measure, passion with correctness, this surely is the ideal” |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, The mooon has many faces, The Watcher is a spooky one! Good Haiku! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yu Lan - thanks it never meant to be dark just turned oiout that way Steve - yeah what a conidence my poem for the challenge is posted in open and titled fate. it also says dennis challenge but igonre that cos I put the wrong name ooops Dennis - Thanks dennis What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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