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The Nod Haiku

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-28 12:23 PM

Summer pulls to curb
It's fuel supply nearly gone
Fall waits for the nod

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2000-08-28 12:42 PM

great analogy Dennis..I like this one

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

2 posted 2000-08-29 03:42 PM

Very clever - really liked this very much!

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

3 posted 2000-08-30 07:33 AM

I like it..

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

4 posted 2000-08-31 08:25 AM

Does this mean the price of gas is going up again?????? Great analogy Dennis, love it. Bonnie

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

5 posted 2000-08-31 10:32 AM

OOhh, liked this much! Really captured the change of seasons here, oh king of haiku.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-09-01 03:33 AM

Dennis~
Absolutely delightful.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2000-09-04 04:51 AM

wow,dennis, this one had me thinking thoughtfully for a moment...well done!

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