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Four Seasons - Haiku

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-09-11 06:25 PM

Snow melts Springs first kiss
Planted on Summers sweet lips
that sigh in Fall's haze

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 09-11-2000).]

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

1 posted 2000-09-11 06:31 PM

Lovely decription of 4 seasons in so little words

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

2 posted 2000-09-11 11:54 PM

you did it, Ms. Ellie, Challenge well met!

BSC

Moderator

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

3 posted 2000-09-12 08:45 AM

WOW Ellie....What a wonderful job you have done with this little beauty.... Oh queen of haiku's you have my humble admiration! Bonnie

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2000-09-12 09:01 AM

Sis,
Yes, another year has gone bye....Uuh,
I mean you have captured the four seasons so wonderfully! Queen of Haiku? I hope I'm invited to the coronation! LOL
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

5 posted 2000-09-12 01:08 PM

Nicely written... enjoyed.

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2000-09-14 11:32 AM

from a budding haikuist to another, i say this was very well done

thank u for responding

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