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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
bodies floating on a tumultous sea of tranquility --hey! Dang it! that's my notebook you're stepping on-- how an ocean so vioent in the middle could look so calm from afar --crap! gotta move slam dancers moving this way-- seemingly moved by the music on some subconscious frequency --wow, is that guy bleeding? oh man! my book bag, covered in beer and dirt-- and like a cobra it all goes still as the music stops --i'm moving! sit by the stoners they don't move around too much-- |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
Your writing is always a treat. Cool poem, keep posting! |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
If it doesn't rhyme, but it sure is INTERESTING!  I like this! It looks like when you just type up whatever comes into your mind, and sometimes the result is something great like this...wonderful job, rich-pa!  Hope to see you post some more!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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