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Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2000-09-28 09:43 PM

Sun rises gently,
Pass over morning dew breeze ,
Beckons a new day.

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-09-28 10:55 PM

There's nothing like a beautiful sunrise!!

Denise

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

2 posted 2000-09-29 12:17 PM

You mean people actually get up and see those things?

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-09-29 04:16 AM

I try to look away..........but the sun rises in your eyes.........well in your verse anyway.

lovely

Jon

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2000-09-29 06:55 AM

Maria,
Beautiful haiku moment, thanks for sharing!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2000-09-29 09:49 AM

~Maria~

A lovely haiku, I, too love the hope of a sunrise

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2000-09-30 05:30 PM

Beautifully put Maria, this one's great

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

7 posted 2000-09-30 06:28 PM

Denise-ta, there isn't is there

KSC-yep early job i'm afaid

Jon, Densis,melissa & LW - Thank you

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

8 posted 2000-09-30 10:31 PM

This is very pretty, Maria

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2000-09-30 11:25 PM

Maria~
Beautifully done !
Very vividly portrayed.

And LOL @ KCS !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

10 posted 2000-10-01 06:04 PM

Thanks Chanson and Marge

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

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