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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Narrow Trickle first, Meahandering though passage, Now busting its banks. There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Maria - I could see the river running in this little gem. Great job. Bonnie |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
 Must be a spring river. Very nice.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks both for reading There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I love the sound of rivers rushing...nicely done, Maria ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Ther's a lot of water about today....but I could dip my toes in this one.... JON |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
MMoonchild - thank you Jon - You can dip yours toes in anytime you want There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
very beautiful words. i thought of that Pocahantas song from the movie... you create your Haikus very well. thanks for responding to the challenge Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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