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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Stars * * Stars shining brightly In the black velvety sky Perfect in design * Twinkling with hope Holding eternal secrets That only night holds * * ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
These really shine, bright and beautiful! Ellie |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ellie - Thank you!  ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ Exquisite thoughts that fairly twinkle on the page. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
You truly shine, rosepetals!  ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
lovely Rose just twinkly...... Jon |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I love to watch the stars at night, and in this haiku as well There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Tara, This haiku is a shining example of your talent! I loved this!Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge - Thank you for stopping in chansondegeste - Aww.. thank you for your nice comments Jon - Thanks for stopping by, thank you! Maria - I'm glad you liked it!  Melissa - Aww... You are so sweet! Thank you |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
I felt the cellestial milk pouring through me. It was a moment of heavenly quenching. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Rose, Wonderful celestial imagery and so well written. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
RosePetals- these are just beautiful. wonderful imagery. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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