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chains" - haikus

coyote
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

0 posted 2001-04-17 07:03 PM

“chains”

they swing their log chains
I ride my shetland pony
we keep our heads down

we jump their fences
they swing their log chains higher
power lines are next

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-17 08:48 PM

This was great. I liked this. Thought it was well written

Ps. thanks for your comments on my poetry. I always look forward to them.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

2 posted 2001-04-17 09:10 PM

Same here, Javier.
Thanks for reading my "insanity" too.

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

Panne447
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

3 posted 2001-04-18 03:06 PM

Coyote, I think these are Senyru(pronounced Send roo) but I like them - not sure I undestand this but I liked it and it brought a childhood memory to me. Go figure. Panne

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

4 posted 2001-04-18 05:58 PM

Thanks, Panne.
An old man I worked for many years ago used to say,
"Ride a Shetland pony Billy, and keep your head down, 'cause some sonofabee is always swingin'a log chain."
This piece stems from that.
And ya know, he was right.

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

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